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  1. #1 My poem 
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    This is a poem i wrote in a slightly Shakespearean style.

    Part 1
    Methinks you loath thine vulgar bosom
    And truly envy mine
    For if thy bosom where any better
    It would still be less than mine

    For all who stare upon my bosom
    For that they’ll surely do
    They scream and awe at its glory
    Its brilliance the envious boo

    Thine build is shapeless
    And bulging through
    The poor, ill-fated cloth
    And Shoe

    But if you choose I’ll teach you
    How to be like me
    To walk and talk seductively
    Now, let’s talk about the fee

    You see, my services are not for free
    They surely come with cost
    The price is this, a trifle dish
    A serving of thine soul

    If you object to this offer
    Then I will not hold offense
    I’ll simply pack up and leave this place
    But that would not make sense

    Pray think for just one second
    And assess the situation
    If you could be just like me
    It’s a wonderful sensation

    I’ll leave with this final word
    Please, let me make my peace
    I’ll give you one, single day
    Before my offers cease


    Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils ... - Louis Hector Berlioz
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    feel free to add anything you think to be appropriate and/or funny


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    I thank thee for thy bouncy offer,
    Delivered in your ditty,
    Methinks thee is enamored of
    Your own enormous titty.

    Your service is uncalled for here,
    So fare thee well and get thee hence,
    For nary a dollar nor a pound
    Shall reward your crass impertinence.
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    I enjoyed that. It flows nicely, and can actually be kind of deep when you really think about it... Good job. Post some more poems if you have them...though perhaps in the Art and Culture forum.
    "There is a kind of lazy pleasure in useless and out-of-the-way erudition." -Jorge Luis Borges
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    Since this is a science forum, how about some poems about science, or poems on scientific themes?
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    because poems about science or arithmatic
    are really boring and have no meaning whatsoever.
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    Fine. Here are some science poems that my brother has written.

    Global warming
    Blood
    The halogen group
    Dinosaurs
    Radioactivity
    The Solar System
    Rocks
    Flowering plants
    The kinetic theory
    Abstract algebra
    Chemical bonds
    Touch, taste and smell
    Radio, television and video
    Liquid crystals

    Hopefully, after reading them, you will totally change your opinion of science poems as being boring and meaningless.
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