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  1. #1 Attention all Poets, Artists, Lyricists, Authors, and Wannabes. 
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    This is a simple verse writing that most anyone can do. All in fun. I am asking you to write a verse for the song "My Bonnie lies over the Ocean". Just one verse per post please, as I will grade them, accept them or not. The chorus is the same , just write the verse, be original, creative, science related if you want, no profanity please. here is the song: have fun My Bonnie Lies Over the Ocean

    My Bonnie lies over the ocean,
    my Bonnie lies over the sea,
    My Bonnie lies over the ocean,
    O bring back my Bonnie to me.
    Chorus:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me, to me:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me.
    O blow ye winds over the ocean,
    O blow ye winds over the sea.
    O blow ye winds over the ocean,
    And bring back my Bonnie to me.
    Repeat chorus
    Last night as I lay on my pillow,
    Last night as I lay on my bed,
    Last night as I lay on my pillow,
    I dreamed that my Bonnie was dead.
    Repeat chorus
    The winds have blown over the ocean,
    The winds have blown over the sea,
    The winds have blown over the ocean,
    And brought back my Bonnie to me.
    Repeat chorus
    My Bonnie leaned over the gas tank,
    The height of its contents to see,
    I lit a small match to assist her,
    O Bring back my Bonnie to me.
    Repeat chorus
    Last night as I lay on my pillow,
    Last night as I lay on my bed,
    I stuck my feet out of the window, ............................................ Sample verse
    In the morning the neighbors were dead.

    Repeat chorus
    My mother makes beer in the bathtub,
    My father makes synthetic gin,
    My sister makes fudge for a quarter,
    Wouldja believe how the money rolls in?
    Repeat chorus
    My mother, she drowned in the bathtub,
    My father, he died from his gin,
    My sister choked on her chocolate,
    My stars, what a fix I am in.
    Repeat chorus
    I tried making beer in the bathtub,
    I tried making synthetic gin,
    I tried making fudge for a living,
    Now look at the shape that I'm in


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    Quote Originally Posted by PhDemon View Post
    Apologies but best I could do in a 5 minute ciggie break...
    The average cigarette burns in about 7 minutes.


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    Bi-o-lo-gy deals with the species',
    While Physics has tied up the Plancks,
    Maths has some real arcane theories,
    so I'll stick to Chemistry thanks.
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me, to me:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me.
    O blow ye winds over the ocean,
    O blow ye winds over the sea.
    O blow ye winds over the ocean,
    And bring back my Bonnie to me. ..........................I like it.
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    My stomach's a little bit queasy
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    O Bonnie has been brewed with the hops.
    Bonnie has been brewed with the barley.
    The nosy neighbors have called the cops.
    Now it's off to prison for me.
    Speaking badly about people after they are gone and jumping on the bash the band wagon must do very well for a low self-esteem.
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    O Bonnie has brewed with the hops.
    My Bonnie has brewed with barley.
    The nosy neighbors have called the cops.
    Now it's off to prison for me.

    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me, to me:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me.

    O blow ye winds over the ocean,
    O blow ye winds over the sea.
    O blow ye winds over the ocean,
    And bring back my Bonnie to me.

    Bi-o-lo-gy deals with the species',
    While Physics has tied up the Plancks,
    Maths has some real arcane theories,
    so I'll stick to Chemistry thanks.

    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me, to me:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me.

    This shaping up , nicely .....need more
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    There once was a cat,
    Oh so lovely cat,
    It was so big,
    It got stuck in a hat.

    >artistsoftheyear
    "Be peaceful, be courteous, obey the law, respect everyone; but if someone puts his hand on you, send him to the cemetery." - Malcolm X.
    "The future belongs to those who prepare for it today." - Malcolm X.
    "Last words are for fools who haven't said enough!" - Karl Marx's last words
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    My Bonnie writes tunes for Bob Dylan,
    My Bonnie sings to babies too.
    My Bonnie entertains the sailors
    There nothin my Bonnie can't do.

    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me, to me:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by sampson View Post
    My Bonnie writes tunes for Bob Dylan,
    My Bonnie sings to babies too.
    My Bonnie entertains the sailors
    There nothin my Bonnie can't do.

    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me, to me:
    Bring back, bring back, O bring back my Bonnie to me.
    Your style reminds me of the poetry of the young John Dryden.
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