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  1. #1 Songwriters 
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    Any of you here write songs? I do, and I enjoy it. I shall post my favorite song. It's about, well, like most of my songs, pollution, the environment, and global warming.

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    I see concrete stretch down to eternity
    A love story with pollution and dust.
    It's a high danger for one hour,
    Destination where the streets are unknown.

    Chorus: Come on down we gotta save this world.
    Come on down we can't afford to give up.

    Well how does it feel?
    Yeah how does it feel to see,
    A thousand metal ants,
    Crawling where the streets are unknown.

    Chorus

    Well town after city,
    Village after street.
    The same old story soon is to die.
    Once there was dust,
    Now there's clear skies!

    Chorus x2


    Comments welcome, as well as songs .


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    Very good , now, how about the dots


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    Please explain.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The P-manator
    Please explain.
    A pleasure Sir,

    Notation, as in crotchet, quaver, semiquaver etc

    What is your avatar is it a Jag I cant quite make it out
    I gather you are a keen motorist.
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    Well, I like puntuating my songs, to give it some colour, so that you are not runnign blindly through the lines.

    And my avatar is a Jag concept. I wish they would put a fuel cell in it.
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    I'm in the process of wrting a song for my guitar lessons now. It's pretty fun. No idea what i'll do for lyrics though, when that part comes up.
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    chords? you cant just read a song and expect it to be good, just without nothing. the sound pitch and takt makes a song a song.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The P-manator
    Any of you here write songs? I do, and I enjoy it. I shall post my favorite song. It's about, well, like most of my songs, pollution, the environment, and global warming.

    Untitled as of Yet

    I see concrete stretch down to eternity
    A love story with pollution and dust.
    It's a high danger for one hour,
    Destination where the streets are unknown.

    Chorus: Come on down we gotta save this world.
    Come on down we can't afford to give up.

    Well how does it feel?
    Yeah how does it feel to see,
    A thousand metal ants,
    Crawling where the streets are unknown.

    Chorus

    Well town after city,
    Village after street.
    The same old story soon is to die.
    Once there was dust,
    Now there's clear skies!

    Chorus x2


    Comments welcome, as well as songs .
    Is the Chorus separate? Or does the main singer sing with them. My personal likes are that you sing that part with them...

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    Well I was singing it with my friends and they just all joined me for the chorus.

    The chords? Am during the verse (with some bass line fun) and C and D for the chorus (acutally, D then C).
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